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A Universal Imagination by ~Stainedcrystal-love:iconStainedcrystal-love:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open




Have you ever thought that everything,
can be what you are trying to make it to believe ?

AND...

everything can change in
a matter of a count down,
1, 2, 3, 4
and anytime soon you can fly away from
the universe you created?

where no one could bother you and you could be yourself,
no words can describe the feeling you HAD...

The moments u shared, the moments that stuck with you
to the moments you cried...

Nevermind...

guess no one can create a whole world of neutral peace of mind

....

live to fullest before extinction gets you
and offers you the flower of forgetfulness

live your life. I lost my chance or instead...i already lived mine and
saw the awful, miserable, gray colors of life and its happy moments to
the truest of love...to where no one can guide you..its the only path you have to walk alone...and for sure the longest.

Good Luck.

©2009 ~Stainedcrystal-love
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Author's Comments

I do not own the picture. imagination was created by punktlos. If any comments on the picture please follow the link :

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thank you

:)

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i couldnt describe how i've been feeling since the past few weeks but writing this gave a little bit of relief. it might not be clear to some...but.......try to figure out and i hope this means something to you ...:worry: :( :)

live your life to the fullest before extinction over comes you....

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~AcePoetiK Apr 7, 2009, 8:39:44 AM
You're exactly right live life to the fullest. You state an excellent point here. They say life is short when in reality life is the longest thing we will ever do.

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~Stainedcrystal-love Apr 7, 2009, 8:52:46 AM
thanks, :) Im glad you saw my point :) :hug: ^^

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=3wyl Apr 7, 2009, 10:19:11 AM
Yes, the message is quite clear in this poem. I like how you've used ellipses effectively for the tone and such.

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Mood: Joy ~Stainedcrystal-love Apr 9, 2009, 1:54:58 PM
thanx...:]

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